整首歌曲听下来，其基调感觉比较适合9到12岁这个年龄段的童声演唱。开始

整首歌曲听下来，其基调感觉比较适合9到12岁这个年龄段的童声演唱。开始前四句还可以。但到了第五句紧紧握住一个信念应把调至少提半度，否知唱起来显得平淡，到了爱是关怀这接下来的4句歌词，应该改为中低音，让人听起来有厚重感，因为爱本来就是有深度，有广度的，没有厚重感，怎么能让人感到大爱无边呢？到了归结点这句爱是深情的目光点亮黑暗的液，应该变得深情舒缓，有张度，能拉伸。总之，歌词写得比较成功，谱曲的话可以在网上请香港天主教协会帮帮忙，因为他们谱曲的好几百首教会歌曲，有很多都是非常成功的。

ผลลัพธ์ (อังกฤษ) 1:

The whole song down, its tone more suited to 9-12 the age of children's singing. Before the start of four sentences. However, in the fifth sentence hold one belief should be at least half a degree, informed sang look tame, to love is to care about the next 4 lines should be changed to bass, make sound feel heavy, because love is the depth, breadth, not weight, how can you make people feel boundless love? To attribute this love is loving eyes light up the dark liquid, should be deeply soothing, and stretching. All in all, lyrics are more successful music available online Catholic Association of Hong Kong, please do me a favor, because their music well hundreds of Church songs, many of which are very successful.

ผลลัพธ์ (อังกฤษ) 2:

Listen to the whole song down, feeling its tone more suitable for 9-12 years old Boys concert this age. Before the start of four sentences also. But in the fifth sentence should firmly hold the belief that at least half of the tune mention whether known singing seem dull, the love is concern that the lyrics the next four, should be replaced in the bass, makes sounds heavy sense, because love has always been the depth, breadth, and no heavy feeling, how can people feel boundless love it? Boils down to the point that love is affectionate phrase dark liquid eyes light up, should become deeply soothing, Zhang degree, can stretch. In short, the more successful written lyrics, compose music, then you can ask the Hong Kong Catholic Association in the online help, because they compose the first church of several hundred songs, many of which are very successful.